The Skaarj Warbrand [REVIEW]
Posted: 21 Sep 2009, 22:18
Part 1:
It's a quick throw into a detailed description of this Skaarj so called Warbrand and his weaponry. What we get later is his quick thoughts about the Nali and the war that is apparently erupting somewhere else in Na-Pali. And we then get right into action as the Warbrand jumps in front of a non suspecting Nali which who then panics and alert the Terran soldiers. This is now where the Action begins and how he easily cuts through the Terran lines of flesh with his shear brutal force inside a building he jumped into before. Then moments later after he was done with the slaughtering he found a suspicious looking house with radar transmitters and a different kind of material the house was built by and he went in to destroy the building and even the whole village. Part 1 ends with a boom and where the Warbrand is leaving his slaughter into the dark night.
After reading part one I felt like continuing to read to know how it will end. And the size of the whole story is not very big but still it fits in a lot just by diverting the whole into 3 parts. However some "rushed grammatical error" were there as I can see it. "His skin was a dark red" which should have excluded the A which I've typed bold here and " All was read" should have been Red instead of Read... Those are not critical errors in my eyes because they look more like as I said "Rushed Grammatical Errors". And since my English isn't anywhere close to perfect I can't point out anything else that is to critical.
How about we get into my Score about Part 1?
Grammar=4
Detail=3
Invention(there is another word for it, but I forgot)=4
In depth story=2
Interest=3
Average 3.5 for part 1.
I will continue to read the rest tomorrow when I have more time and rate them individually and then all three together.
Part 2:
To be reviewed.
Part 3:
To be reviewed.
Over and out, Zombiehunter AKA "Electric Ice"
How was my review on the first part? Am I good enough for the job?
It's a quick throw into a detailed description of this Skaarj so called Warbrand and his weaponry. What we get later is his quick thoughts about the Nali and the war that is apparently erupting somewhere else in Na-Pali. And we then get right into action as the Warbrand jumps in front of a non suspecting Nali which who then panics and alert the Terran soldiers. This is now where the Action begins and how he easily cuts through the Terran lines of flesh with his shear brutal force inside a building he jumped into before. Then moments later after he was done with the slaughtering he found a suspicious looking house with radar transmitters and a different kind of material the house was built by and he went in to destroy the building and even the whole village. Part 1 ends with a boom and where the Warbrand is leaving his slaughter into the dark night.
After reading part one I felt like continuing to read to know how it will end. And the size of the whole story is not very big but still it fits in a lot just by diverting the whole into 3 parts. However some "rushed grammatical error" were there as I can see it. "His skin was a dark red" which should have excluded the A which I've typed bold here and " All was read" should have been Red instead of Read... Those are not critical errors in my eyes because they look more like as I said "Rushed Grammatical Errors". And since my English isn't anywhere close to perfect I can't point out anything else that is to critical.
How about we get into my Score about Part 1?
Grammar=4
Detail=3
Invention(there is another word for it, but I forgot)=4
In depth story=2
Interest=3
Average 3.5 for part 1.
I will continue to read the rest tomorrow when I have more time and rate them individually and then all three together.
Part 2:
To be reviewed.
Part 3:
To be reviewed.
Over and out, Zombiehunter AKA "Electric Ice"
How was my review on the first part? Am I good enough for the job?