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[u1] Custom Map Review: "Altar" by Miki "CORWIN" Steiner

Posted: 11 May 2013, 21:01
by Delacroix
Altar by Miki "CORWIN" Steiner
Review tagline: The gameplay is different and unique thanks to puzzles and platforming elements.

Main review:

Altar is a small, three levels long single player adventure made in 2001 by a Czech first-time mapper Corwin. As with many first works, this too has its share of flaws, but surprisingly, the author really did his homework and tried to minimize such issues. And it shows. What also matters is that Corwin did his best to make the gameplay different and unique by implementing logical puzzles and platforming into the pack instead of just relying on the standard run-and-gun rules of engagement.

You play the part of a crewman of a military vessel, sent with a mission to investigate an emergency distress call. Tracking down the source of this S.O.S. will lead you into a building that is part-temple, part-catacombs and part-housing. It's a typical newbie error: a dungeon with no apparent purpose. That pretty much kills the mood if you're picky but if you're not, there's quite a few nice surprises.

Your unimpressive vessel.

The architecture of the level does not impress when compared to more advanced works but given the fact it is Corwin's first mapping endeavor, it does demand some respect. The valley your ship has landed in has vertical, unimpressive walls and an occassional BSP error at the top but is otherwise quite decent. At least it's no squarefest. The main building which is composed of the later two maps is quite another matter: all areas are very basic constructs, some of them appear unrealistic, like the stone spiral staircase which would probably collapse in reality. The lighting is also unimpressive, some of the places are too dark to see a thing. I've seen no particular eyesores in terms of texturing though but it also is nothing remarkable.

The inside of the dungeon.

There is nothing particuarly pleasant for ear either: practically no ambience and in places where it does appear it seems to have too big a range, like the ship's computers that are quite clearly heard quite a few steps from the vessel. The music... it is there but an hour or two after playing the level I forgot which tracks are used -- which means one thing: it is not used in a memorable manner.

A staircase to die for... or under, more like.

The pack does shine in terms of gameplay though. As I mentioned already, it isn't just about running and shooting. There's puzzles, ranging from infuriating adventure-style button search to quite inventive bridge operation mechanics and well-hidden secrets. There's also a platforming section where you need to navigate a set of moving square platforms over lava in order to reach a spot that's three floors above your starting point. You can solve this in two ways: either move a metal box over the switch to keep the platforms moving all the time or leave the switch uncovered and shoot it when you need the platforms to move. Simply put: the level allows some freedom in how to approach this particular problem. Were it used more prominently along the pack, the score would go up a big deal. But even though it's just a curiosity, it's a valuable lesson to other mappers how to get things done: allow more than one approach to the problem. And all this was done with clever use of simple triggers - which is rare for a newcomer mapper and in 2001 was even tougher to pull off, without all the helpful tutorials available today.

However, there is one gripe I have with the final boss. It's just too damn easy to beat! The author has created a series of alcoves the player can hide where the boss's attacks will rarely reach if ever. This allows you to pummel the creature mercilessly with barely any danger to yourself. Pretty much kills the suspense.

The platforming section.


Albeit Altar isn't a visual or atmospheric marvel, its unique gameplay approach does provide a recompensation for the level's shortcomings. It's obviously worth to play it if you're in for something new.

Architecture: 2
Texturing: 4
Lighting: 2
Sound: 2
Technical Execution: 5

Conceptual Grandness: 3
Story Construction: 3
Story Implementation: 4
Gameplay Awe: 7
Gameplay Balance: 3

Final score: 35%

Downloads: - KlanKAOS - 1.24 MB - UnrealTexture - 1.24 MB - DropBox - 1.24 MB

Re: [u1] Custom Map Review: "Altar" by Miki "CORWIN" Steiner

Posted: 09 Oct 2013, 14:56
by TheIronKnuckle
Good review and I think the score is spot-on