Definitely if we are going to do a second volume I'd like a more robust dialogue system because I agree the tiny blue text can be hard to read at times. I don't really have any scripting knowledge myself though so if someone has something lying around I'd be really happy!
Also if someone can recommend something it might be worth retroactively refitting Volume 1 with the dialogue system.
@IronKnuckle: I think something like 1 to 1,5 hours?
Qtit made the start of the first map up to the point where the titan punches through the wall
I made the section with the three junctions up to the bit at the end of the temple with The Monster and the rabbit
Zacman made The Bloblets HQ
Ebd made the first part of The Bloblets keychain dimension up to and including the transsexualizer and the first convo with Takk
Turbo made shantytown and the train
Mman made the first part of map 2 with the Rabbit convo and I think the bit of the temple you get ported to before the bridge (I'm not totally sure, help me out here
Turbo made a large part of the temple of Evil Villainy with the restaurant, gift shop and (not totally sure) the giant snake room? (might be Qtit already)
Qtit made the Chalice gallery and the fake Chalice of Awesome Evilness room
ebd made the room with the reflesher up to the point where Takk kicks the grate open
I made the warehouse where the real Chalice of Awesome Evilness is kept, and the Battlebeasts event
sana made the corridor with the explosive barrels everywhere
Mman made the entire final battle with the Bloblet including the bit in the gift shop
I made the credits sequence[/spoiler]