Nice one ebd, thanks for sharing! I like the custom video thumbnail as well

and as usual thank you Semfry for the official playthrough video, and speaking of thumbnails, I like how your video displays a Sudoku moment - which is one of the defining features of this map
I really like this map: it isn't as good as the best levels in
Steele Dawn, but it's a nice change of pace from the traditional romp, with most of it being a comfortable exploration of the environments with some story moments and, as mentioned, puzzles in the form of Sudoku with Nali symbols. Of course, the climax with the final boss fight is quite the contrast and is another nice surprise.
River Ruins is simultaneously very modern (way more than
Unreal) and old school. It's unique to the same degree as the previous maps in the campaign and, while not as epic as
Old Township, it's a good example of how to give a breather after a long, tough map without reducing the experience to being merely a "transition" level.
Now some criticism about the voice acting: I feel the need to say this with some care as, historically, a bunch of mostly young people on a game-related online forum has resulted in rather poorly communicated feedback, rife with exaggeration and attempts at elevating oneself by putting down others (young people often have something to prove, right? plus insecurities, right? and it doesn't help that folks aren't communicating face-to-face, the anonymous nature of posting stuff online "disinhibits" etc.). I remember broadly enjoying the voice acting in
ONP - even if it clearly has moments where it fails due to the script or acting or sound quality (or a combo of those things), other times it works in both serious and funny moments, and I like the actual voice too most of the time - and the same goes for
Xidia: The Escape, and especially
7 Bullets, and we'll talk about another example later as well, but basically I wanted to say that incorporating voice acting in
Steele Dawn is broadly a success IMHO. Brandon Steele is hit and miss but mostly OK, Captain Taylor is good, Gal'Razik is good, and for the record the similarly sounding Skaarj Worshipper brothers are fine too (ebd is right btw, it's pronounced "Scare" :p ). The atmosphere in
River Ruins is generally speaking good but one thing pulled me out of it: the voice acting for Alvai. This isn't to say that I don't like the person's voice or something dumb like that: there is a sincere effort at doing the job seriously, but aside from not being professional, the voice simply reminds me of a young, modern Western man. This isn't a Nali, and the actor tries to have a deeper voice in a way that's very noticeable. It's at least a casting issue (though I sympathise with the difficulty in getting hold of anyone - this is all hobby material after all, and it's nice when someone is brave enough to step forward). Not helping is the fact that we've all heard how Nali speak a million times before, with notably
Nali Chronicles opting to re-use and remix the sound bytes from
Unreal for its numerous conversations.
Aside from the Sudoku puzzle sequences which benefit from the novelty factor (definitely a first in our modding scene, and excellent implementation), the boss fight also feels unique: it's like a Yrex take on
EXU2, great fun! I didn't care much for the music which was too "lighthearted" for this sort of thing IMO, like I'm in some kid-friendly old school
Final Fantasy or something, but I did enjoy the cinematic with the anime style "You die here, softskin!" and the fight itself - while easy on Medium difficulty because you're pretty much fully stocked at this point - is very dynamic. The visuals go pretty wild in that flashy way which, again, reminds me of
EXU2
Another first I have to mention is the presence of female Nali: hell yeah baby, we finally got there

however the model is merely OK: it's obviously the result of sticking together parts from two default
Unreal models, but it gets the job done (it's even associated with some very brief female "unit taunts" to borrow a phrase from the RTS scene). The Ravager as a matured Predator remains the best new creature type in
Steele Dawn.